Almost a quote

I won’t say ours was a tough school, but we had our own coroner. We used to write essays like: What I’m going to be when I grow up. – Lenny Bruce
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A word has been added or deleted, or replaced by another word, to arrive at the ‘almost a quote’ above. Which word?
October 17th, 2009 at 3:26 am
“When” should be “if”.